Flourish:
An Electronic Newsletter for Scholarly Writers
January
2006
vol. 2, no. 1
Years
ago, when my family was living in Ethiopia, my father treated
several patients who had diabetes. As a clinical researcher,
he found the cases interesting since they were in stark
contrast to those he had seen in North America. Unlike the
great majority of American diabetics, who are middle aged
or older and overweight, these patients were young, teenagers,
and slender. They entered the hospital hyperventilating,
dehydrated, and semicomatose.
So,
he went to the medical college's library to see what he
could find out about diabetes in Ethiopia. Fifteen years
of the Ethiopian Medical Journal revealed no articles. An
East African medical journal had only one small study of
adult diabetes: they thought the pancreas was not producing
enough insulin due to the patients' poor nutritional status.
My father ended up doing a modified treatment, giving them
some insulin but then turning to dietary restrictions and
oral medications, based on his thought that these were intermediate
cases, between adult onset and juvenile diabetes. The patients
responded to his treatment and later could be treated with
oral medications alone, unlike typical juvenile diabetics.
He
mentioned the cases to my mother, who encouraged him to
publish his thoughts. He demurred, saying he had only three
cases and wasn't sure whether anybody outside of Ethiopia
would be interested in them. Besides, he didn't think the
findings were impressive enough to be publishable. My mother
responded, “It's the first article on the topic, it doesn't
have to be comprehensive, it just has to be written.” Maybe
later, he said, as it was very busy at the provincial hospital.
“Later rarely comes,” she wisely commented. So he took the
time then and submitted a brief article to the Ethiopian
Medical Journal on the cases he had seen. In 1969, it was
published.
Thirty
years later, in 1999, my father was walking towards his
hotel in the capital Addis Ababa when he saw a sign for
a medical clinic that had a lab. Curious, he decided to
walk in. The clerk took him to meet the Ethiopian doctor
in charge of the lab and they got to talking. The topic
of diabetes came up and my father mentioned that he had
treated some patients years ago and written a little article
on the topic. The Ethiopian doctor exclaimed, “That was
you?! I know that article. Everyone knows that article.
It was the first article published about diabetes in Ethiopia.
And one of the few articles to be written about rural medicine.
It's wonderful to meet you.”
When
I commented to my father that it was a good thing he wrote
the article, he nodded. “I didn't know then what I know
now, that even little things can have a long-term impact.
At the time, it always seemed like an imposition to spend
so much time writing something so small. But years later,
that small thing would still be making a contribution, long
after everything else I was doing, which seemed so important
at the time, had been forgotten.”
Good
News
A
couple of newsletters ago I talked about Liz, who was on
the verge of filing in the first week of September when
she got bad news on two fronts: her chapter revisions and
her health. Her advisor balked at signing off on her last
chapter and her doctors informed her that she needed major
surgery to avoid cancer. I am happy to report that Liz underwent
the surgery in early December and is now completely cancer
free! Before the surgery, she worked away on revising her
dissertation through October and December, while teaching
classes four days a week at campuses fifty miles apart.
Her advisor finally signed off on the dissertation right
before her surgery. Liz spent the week after surgery in
bed, but then got up, went to campus, and filed! She was
a doctor by mid-December. It was three months later than
she had initially planned, but a total triumph under the
circumstances.
I asked her if she had any words of wisdom for others pursuing
their doctorate and she responded, “I wasn't always disciplined,
but I always persevered. There were long periods where I
didn't do anything (for various reasons, some good, some
not so good), but I always managed to get back on track.”
So, if you are feeling behind or slow these days, remember,
it is the tortoise who wins the race.
Readers
Write In
Speaking
of perseverance: “I wanted to let you know, Wendy, that
on Saturday night, December 17th, I stood in line with dozens
of last-minute Christmas shoppers at the airport post office
to send off my paper to the editors of [journal name omitted].
I finally finished making the final edits to the paper over
the weekend, formatting it according to their specifications,
and trimming it down to 30 pages (including double-spaced
endnotes). When it was finally done, I wanted to send it
off right away. Of course, only the airport post office
is open late on Saturday night, so I drove down there at
8:00 pm and nearly turned around when I saw the line of
people with packages. But, I decided that if I turned around
and went back home, I might change my mind about something
and try to make more changes to the paper, so I stuck it
out and stood in line with everyone. They were all in good
spirits. After a few minutes in line, I hesitated again,
thinking my time could be better spent elsewhere, but when
I looked behind me, the line was starting to stretch out
the door. At 9:00 pm, an hour later [!], I sent off copies
of my paper to each of three reviewers for the journal,
as requested on their editorial page, and set up tracking
numbers to my e-mail, so I will know when they arrive. Who
knows, they might even have arrived by Christmas…”
News
from the Editor
I
can't believe that we are embarking on the second half of
the decade: so many projects, so little time. But I am trying
to put the important first and the urgent second. May we
all have a good writing year!